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Today I have been learning about energy and it was phenomenal.

One thing I found tricky was what uses energy and my incredible miss Fortes helped me .

It would be great if you could comment on my post and give me some feedback to make my learning better.

Have a Go Sports Day.

Today was have a go at sports day and it was great,Have a go at sports day is all about year 3 and 4 trying out at Keith hay park and parents and family's can come along.There was a lot of activities that was fun.My favorite was gymnastic at the gymnasium because it was fantastic because we did some stretches and then we went on the trampoline on to balancing and we went on the bars we swan and swan and I was overexcited. We had a good day at Have a Go Sports Day.

Writing

I have been learning how to do an OREO paragraph.  OREO stands for opinion, reason, example, and restating your opinion.  Restate means to say it again.  I wrote this paragraph to persuade the reader to agree with my idea.

The most phenomenal creation in the world are monarch The most phenomenal creation in the world are monarch butterflies.Monarch butterflies are orange and cute.o know I believe that we should get more monarch butterflies in the thinking garden.Monarch butterflies are fascinating and  symmetrical.

The most phenomenal creation in the world is penguins.Penguins walk side ways Because they have small feet and they love the cold like ice ,snow and wind.So I believe you have to get a penguin.